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wow man, that is some true shit, happens everywhere, people say stuff like god bein with you all the time wether u beleive in him or not, hes always there for u in tough times, GREAT song man

Posted by: anthony curtis on 2/7/2008, 9:05 PM

So you’re fighting all forms of ignorance, arrogance, hatred and greed with spirituality in this one. Very clever. Excellent! Nice setting.

Posted by: Eddison Baptiste on 1/4/2008, 10:04 PM

so i do like your critisium thats why i reworded the first song a little and changed the color of the third so thanks and i hope to hear more from you
your friend,
~slave~

Posted by: slave on 12/5/2007, 3:37 AM

Thanks for your comments...a

Posted by: alex clemons on 6/24/2007, 1:00 AM

I really like it alot.

Posted by: samantha hull on 6/23/2007, 8:02 PM

Alex - I really like the lyrics - is this a personal journey of yours.
PoetUnderGlass

Posted by: Douglas William White on 4/13/2007, 6:22 PM

An excellent read start to finish. I was never in a war, and don`t plan to be, but I do have faith, or belief. It depends on how you look at it, I suppose.
The imagery was simple, and still profound. I think the overall structure helped to make the entire song seem real and believable--to me it looks rough, much like an army situation would be. And God? Awesome.

I fear my review doesn`t make sense. But I`m not going to change it because this is stream of consciousness. I really really did like this. If you get a melody up for it, I`ll surely listen! Good job!

Posted by: Beckydale on 4/9/2007, 7:30 AM

Michael, OIF III was Operation Iraqi Freedom III. I was there from November 04 until October 05.

Posted by: Malcolm Rios on 4/9/2007, 6:34 AM

Malcolm
Whats OIF lll?, sorry to appear ignorant
Michael

Posted by: Michael Mackinnon on 4/9/2007, 6:23 AM

As a vet of OIF III, I appreciate your words ... especially the truth of God in the midst of war. Thank you.

Posted by: Malcolm Rios on 4/9/2007, 6:14 AM

WOW, the story in this was a must read to the end, as anna said without the music it kinda loses a lot of impact, but it was still a very very enjoyable read.

Posted by: Michael Mackinnon on 4/9/2007, 5:31 AM

This is one of my favorites of yours. The inspired by is so true for a lot of people. The chorus is really good. I hope you get a melody up soon, I wanna see how it goes. What style of music would this be? It doesn`t say. I think the lyrics are very country, and it could be a hit country song. But I also think it could fall into the rock or blues spectrum also. Good work. -Anna

Posted by: Anna on 4/1/2007, 11:29 AM