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	"You Think You`re Mona Lisa" / RubyFalls Song lyrics, added: 2/15/2007, Loss

	Lyrics by: RubyFalls
	Inspired by: friend of mine betrayed me
	Viewed: 511 times
	Preferred music genre: Rock and Pop

	Superman won’t come to save you You brought this on yourself You lied, cheated, and stabbed in the back Now you’ll have to deal with The consequences of your actions Don’t think for a minute That I’ll turn back around When I hear your cries I won’t care at all You think you know something that I don’t So you smile like the Mona Lisa You’re a liar and a cheater And even the Hounds of Hell Could tell you that Don’t think for a minute That I’ll turn back around When I hear your cries I won’t care at all

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I think its a great start but would be even better if you added another verse (doubled the length of the song) as it gets you in and then leaves you hanging.

Posted by: Francis Armstrong on 9/21/2008, 8:50 PM

cool song

Posted by: r.a.wise on 11/6/2007, 8:27 PM

to Sarah`s voice: Your voice is to soft and plain, the guitar overpowered you. A tip would be using a mnusic software like garageband, play the tune first, then sing the song in another track then merge them together, I hope that helps. Oh yes, some lines like `I won`t care at all` you should make it sound more...impactful...as if you really don`t care at all.

Posted by: Marielle on 3/30/2007, 4:58 AM

Your sound has to blend with the tune...like...really feel the music, and the sound`s too soft. Nice lyrics. Four stars.

Jas

Posted by: Marielle on 3/28/2007, 3:40 AM

I think your lyrics are good, but your melody is bland, (not the guitar) the vocal line.

Posted by: Juliette Dubois on 3/20/2007, 6:39 PM

On your page you state that you have trouble composing? Listening to this song I do-not think so. You have successfully expressed your feeling about an experience and that is the key to good song writing. I think you have talent and with growth in confidence, some music training and personal experience your songwriting/performing abilities will only improve. Keep it up.

Posted by: Eddison Baptiste on 3/20/2007, 4:57 PM

yes, short and sweet. As the saying goes "Try not to bore us and get to the chorus". Hey, if R.E.M. can have a top 40 hit with "One I love" (only five lines in the song) then who knows what can happen.

Posted by: Das VonderBurg on 2/16/2007, 10:08 AM

To be honest, I enjoyed reading this. The lyrics are interesting, and the title is brilliant (though it`s actually "You Think You`re Mona Lisa," not "You Think Your Mona Lisa.) But it`s an overused theme, and the lyrics are a bit short. On the other hand, the short lyrics keep this from being as cliched as it very easily could be.

Posted by: Sophia Babai on 2/15/2007, 11:13 PM

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